I agree with a lot of what's already been said. What you have is good. I think you could work on the timing, I think it was kind of slow. Your work will obviously get better with time, and this is very impressive. I will confess to filling guilty that I found this funny. You introduce a character and a situation and then you kill them. This is funny but very overdone. It's a simple solution and once a way to have a twist ending, but I've both seen and done it too many times. I understand the longer the story the more you have to work but the ending is kind of trite. I till chuckled though so you must have done something right.
I found it very funny, it had a good plot, and the great writing. The only thing I could be improved is the pacing. It kind of drags when brian and puff are on the road as well as when puff calls to check up on the house. Also, I think you should have used a puttering sound effect when the car died out or showed the gas gauge because you could barely see the background through the window, you could have maybe drawn a rock or cactus to show that the car stopped. It was great It just got kinda slow there in the middle. I think your very funny and I look forward to hour next submission. Great work and thanks for sharing
I actually like that it's so short. I think that you got something going here, I found my self playing it over again so I could read the text. For something as short as this dos'nt really need music, however I do think you could utilize some other sound effects like "popping" or "chiming" when the product pops up. I also think the script could have used some cleaning up, some word choices in the dialogue would have been better than others. It's great, there's nothing wrong with it other than polishing up little things. I look forward to your next post and thanks for sharing.
By the moons of Yoggoth!
Liked the scarecrow bit. The monkey with the pomp reminded me of Jhonen Vasquez.
It was complete shit, and I LOVED IT!
I just want to say that I really enjoyed this. The alligator saying "oh snap" won me over, and I have agree with the general, "the joy of pooping" more than compensates for a really bad day. Yup nothing like taking a big satisfyingly dump to get over hard times. Strange how this kind of fit the theme for this years April Fools Day.
Fist of, I don't know where in the hell you got the Russian national anthem but its presence alone was inspiring. The rising of Cthulu to the call of Dio's Holy Diver was genius. And HeMan getting whacked in the head with an ax was'nt bad ether.
The title was really chught my eye, when I saw "Psycho Bunny" I immeiately thoght of bunny that kills people, but it was quiet the opposite. I really like the fact that he froze when the "nightmare things" came after him, like he felt victomized and, especially, how he overcame them. I am wondering, however, if will ever overcome the thing that created them when he was sane. I relly like this charictor, it's kind of cross between Filler Bunny, and Johnny The Homicidal Maniac
The Art of Symbolism
This was a great peice, but you can't just expect people to get a masage right away. most people are looking for action, romance, sex, violence, and most of all humor, but this had none so it did not pass the "standerds" of meny people. But keep in mind that people are looking for a good drama every now and then. The graphics need some work, it could have used a story with some carrictors, SO people could get an emotional feel, not that I don't recognize the hole "art" concept, but still if your going to make something make it intresting.
thanks for the review, i thought it was interesting! lol
Credits That Count!
Wow, that was one the the best "Rip OffS!" I have ever seen. Basicly you re-created a music video for "Zelda 'Rabbit Joint Cover'". That agerd me, but then I saw that the song was credited by The Rabbit Joint. This makes me happy, and what makes things happy, makes them give good reviews. but don't do it again!
The Fist One I've Seen, And I'm Glad It Was.
This was the fist "film" I have seen on this site, and I am greatful that it was. It was recomendid to me by a friend and now, finaly being apart of your community I can give my credit to it's creator.
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