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Really like this.

Words I would use to describe the feeling and moods this creates: inocent, playful, childish, mesmerizing, wonder, discovery. I really like this. It reminds me of Poltergeist. It's great and thanks for sharing.

lilacmoonlight responds:

Oh man!!
Thanx a lot for the review!!

Nice start.

It's a nice start. I agree with N4B5T3R, it's a little top heavy. I feel it could flow better if you check the chords where the strings kick in. I definitely want to hear what happens where it faded out. Can't wait for the finished version and thanks for sharing.

takeflight responds:

Yeah you can hear that lead come in right before it fades out comletely, it's just part of my technique :] Thnx for the review!

Spy Games!

I'm sorry but the whole time I was listening I kept thinking Monty Norman and John Barry. It was like someone sampled James Bond Theme for Hip Hop song. It's good, I like it, but it just reminds me of 007.

Liked it.

Haunting. If i had to choose one word to describe this, haunting would be that word. Both the music and lyrics fit that story really well. However I feel that this stands on it's own away from that story. Musically I feel you could take this further and make it your own. I loved how you used the gun sound effects and the vocal harmonies. A couple of things I had a problem with were the baseline and the abrupt ending. I liked it and thanks for sharing.

Stargame responds:

I DO have to apologize for the abrupt ending.... Before I could completely finish the song, my computer crapped out and I lost it. Luckily, I still had it on my mp3 player, so this is actually the half-finished cut. The bassline was indeed very simple... I wanted something that would blend with everything else (rather than stick out), but still make a difference in the sound at the same time. Though good sounding, the harmonies still needed a little work... It's actually fairly hard to do harmony with oneself, and seeing as I'm fairly new to doing so, there were a few parts in the harmony section that were a tad off in terms of balance, blend, and timing. I appreciate the in-depth review, it's nice being able to hear that I could instill feeling into someone through one of my songs (even though it is technically both mine and my classmate's song XD).

It's really good.

This is not what I expected from reading the title. I was thinking of something slow and calm. I might be taking the title to literal, it's probably just a title, but it got me excited and pumped up to play a game. I think it would be really cool if I actually heard something like this at a start menu of a game. It's really good and thanks for sharing.

Cool.

I can't help but wonder what would lead to this and what would come after. Here are some words I feel describe this: sinister, mocking, brooding, sorrow, regret. I would love to hear what this might fit between.

This was really neat.

I like it. However, I feel it could have been better if you added a little more texture and rhythm. While listening I felt potential for a really cool moving bass line and counter melody. This was really cool to listen and thank you for sharing.

Labmouse responds:

Wow, thanks for the thorough review! Having my work examined makes me do the happy dance!

Yeah, I have to admit, this song is a bit ambient and skeletal by nature. I might tinker with adding a bit more foreground. If I stumble upon something that sounds cool, I'll be sure to upload it for you!

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